Shading for his head under the helmet, use ellipse of darker color than skin gradient/no gradient
Make him some shoulders, simply add another joint to his torso is aight
Make his hands thinner than his clothes so it doesnt look like clothes are stuck to his arm (optional)
Make the color of the front of his arm lighter and the colors of the back of his arm darker
Same goes with his legs
To make the parts look more distinct
Add some hair under his helmet
Shading for his head under the helmet, use ellipse of darker color than skin gradient/no gradient
Make him some shoulders, simply add another joint to his torso is aight
Make his hands thinner than his clothes so it doesnt look like clothes are stuck to his arm (optional)
Make the color of the front of his arm lighter and the colors of the back of his arm darker
Same goes with his legs
To make the parts look more distinct
His belt and the strap torso detail stuff looks neat doe
His helmet is aight
Also nice gun
Maybe you can add clothes folding for his arm detail like this so it isnt plain

Overlap the ellipse gradient with another ellipse or segment etc
Mmm yes