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    Shadow_CD 2020-12-08 17:31:22 UTC

    Do you like?

    If not tell me what to change

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    • No offence but if you were to ask someone what is a cliche oc they’d list the abilities you just did.

      The reason being is it’s too powerful, and to say he moves as fast as time itself, makes no sense, time is a title and measurement for the speed and duration of things, of he could move at the speed of time than would there would be no time because he supposedly moves at the speed of it to the point where nothing exists, that’s one of the answers that still doesn’t make sense.

      Simply put add some realism and limitations to the abilities, add a common theme to his abilities and maybe implement his abilities into how he looks.

      If he can move fast, throw meteors, make it rain meteors and burst into flames than it would be considered space themed, hyper speeds, manipulation with meteors, ability to go supernova or just really hot. Then his design could have stars, flames and meteors along with maybe a speedometer or something somewhere or as his signature item, this way the character is more rounded, still powerful but is more believable.

      2020-12-08 17:46:26 UTC 3
      • Replying to: Tastylemon16No offence but if you were to ask someone what is a cliche o

        Ok thx I’ll try and edit it

        2020-12-08 20:09:54 UTC 0
    • Feels a bit generic
      Like a smorgasbord of stolen anime moves
      and it’s too op, in the kinda boring way

      2020-12-08 17:47:43 UTC 0
    • First off, the bacteria skele-freak discovered, your oc is infected with op syndrome.

      The cure is to add limitations.

      Your oc is also infected with unreal syndrome.

      The cure is to make it more realistic.

      2020-12-08 17:58:31 UTC 2
    • Generic AF

      2020-12-08 18:14:33 UTC 0