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    Darkboy Animationsubscriberchristmas-2022-winnertreasure-trove-winnerfeatured-lvl1 2018-08-16 03:38:09 UTC

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    • It’s decently well animated, I like the effects. I applaud you on this one, DB. However, I suggest try adding more little details, and fix some things in some scenes. For example, the the white air boy attacking the blue H2O boy, air boy’s arm thing was a bit broken, however, that’s the only one I noticed, so far. Story’s somewhat decent. Pretty nice. 7/10.
      Prepare to get attacked by the critics who hate scarfies, by the way.

      2018-08-16 05:32:56 UTC 3
      • Replying to: SquiSNIt's decently well animated, I like the effects. I applaud

        Thank you for your lil cnc! This will help me to Improve more!

        2018-08-16 14:32:50 UTC 1
    • did very good with some action to start off, then the intro, then some dialogue/plot, then back to action

      it’s a simple formula a lot of people miss, and then you’re like 30 seconds into the video about to click away because it’s just textextextextext boring

      try to have a little more animation during text tho, you do well enough so it’s not static images, but just a little sway in the body, etc, helps

      good syncing with the music too, and humor on point lol

      overall good stuff, looking forward to more yo

      2018-08-16 12:16:53 UTC 1