Too choppy, don’t be afraid to take some extra time to make every single movement.

Don’t rush

…is not something you would expect to hear

Small titan sits and enjoy’s the sunlight when a half naked red man disturbs his peace. The red man summons a knife and stabs the titan which made the titan lose mass amounts of weight. This titan is know slim and buetiful, this disturbs a fatter titan making him angry at the fact that he will never become as slim as the first titan. In anger he eats the first titan and the half naked red man and enjoys the sunlight.

It’s a little stiff, try to make the people and guy have weight (e.g. Make stickfigures crouch when landing, make the dude/dude-girl with tail to lean/sway where the person throws the tail.)

The characters dont look alive. They look like those haunted stones you see in movies that move a bit, stop, then move a bit. Try to move more limbs more consistently, id say around 4 limbs not counting segments of the tail.

that tail looks a bit like something else

Where in the name of hell did that gun come from