• Replying to comment by: Keanu ReevesNot reading cause when I pressed read more there was no imag

    …Wh-

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    I hit ‘read more’ on my post above this and it scrolled down, and I swear, I thought this was a JoJo-dude and Cell fusion for a sec. I had to scroll back down.

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  • Replying to comment by: // Flashlock Animator(Here's the entire rest of chapter one. Only hit 'read mor

    (Left some hints as to what Void is a parallel to, somebody try to gue-)

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  • (Here’s the entire rest of chapter one. Only hit ‘read more’ if you wanna read a ton more.)

    “Hoo boy, these are heavy as crud!” Eeto said, struggling to lift his arms up after the weights had been put on. After a few tries, he could only lift them a mere 2 inches off the ground at most, until exhaustion took over and he couldn’t lift them at all for a while.
    “Yeah, they’ll take some getting used to. Y’know, most Furutans never get to this point. And yet, here you guys are, working on the weights to finish off your third week!” Namgo exclaimed. “And that’s to say nothing of your FPUs.”
    “…Grrraah!” Eeto suddenly lifted as hard as he could, successfully holding the weights almost a foot above the ground for 3 seconds before letting them go, a vibration being sent out across the floor.
    “Woah! Bro, chill- I think I felt your power spike up by 6!” Epla warned. “Plus, too much effort, and you might hurt yourself. Pull a muscle or somethin’.”
    “Yeah, but I just really wanna get everything out of this that I can.” Eeto
    leaned back and sat down for a bit. Meanwhile, Epla lifted and got his weights 4 inches off the ground for a whole second.
    “So, how long are we gonna use these? Like long-term, before our next training sub-unit?” Eeto asked.
    “I always leave that up to my trainees. Whenever they feel ready, then we move on,” Namgo replied. Eeto nodded, and then put his weights back on after a few more seconds had passed. He realized that he could lift them a lot easier now, and lifted them a little under 2 feet this time.
    “I guess an increase of 6 FPUs really ‘packs a punch’, huh?” He joked, holding them there for a good 4 seconds before slowly letting them down with a sigh.
    “Aaand I think you just went up 10 more,” Namgo said.
    “Holy crud! Lemme try again…” Epla lifted as hard as he could and found he could almost lift his weights as high as Eeto could.
    “There we go, guys! Epla, you just went up 8 FPU!” Namgo said, clapping. “You guys are growing quickly, but I think that’s enough for today. We shouldn’t push ourselves too much. Let’s get meditating’!” With that, the boys slid off their weights and sat down. They spent the whole 30 minutes meditating as usual.

    [Planet Furuta, Age 782]

    Eeto and Epla, now 15, had long since been moved to a meditation-only training style. Namgo took note of how much more their power grew during meditation than the other forms of training, and talked with King Durian about switching them over, to which he agreed. Their power levels had dramatically risen over the past three years, much to nobody’s surprise, and both were in the high 20,000’s on the FPU scale. Recently, however, the boys were starting to gain a thin, black aura around them during the exact middle of meditation- perhaps the peak?- and they seemed to grow even stronger during this time. However, it seemed to slowly be taking a toll, as their meditation times slowly shortened.
    “Hey, uh, Eeto and Epla?” Namgo asked one day.
    “Yup?” The boys replied at the same time.
    “I wanted to talk about this weird aura thing that’s been happening lately. It’s impacting your guys’ performance both ways.”
    “What aura thing?” Epla asked.
    “During the ‘peak’ of your meditation, you both gain a black aura of sorts. I don’t know what it is, but I’m just worried that it’s slowly taking its toll on you guys.”
    “That… does sound kinda weird. Maybe Durian knows something about it?” Eeto suggested with a shrug. Namgo took his advice, however, and went straight to Furuta’s king.
    “They gain a black aura during their Ki meditation? B-but that could only mean… Oh no,” Durian said, a look of worry spreading across his face.
    “What? What does it mean?” Namgo asked.
    “Did your parents not tell you about the legend? Agh, and apparently Eeto and Epla’s haven’t, either… It seems it’s been lost to the past generations. I’ll make it quick,” he said with a sigh, Namgo sitting down in place ready for an explanation.
    “Long ago, Furutans were not the race we are today. We were originally members of a race called Saiyans. They were ruthless warriors, much unlike us. To put it simply, they believed in brawling over every little disagreement. They all had a rivalry with each other, in a way. One Saiyan, however, decided against this. And because this was against Saiyan nature, he was frowned upon.
    “Although soon, more Saiyans suddenly sided with him,” He continued. “This Saiyan was my grandfather. I am actually King Durian the third. But that’s beside the point. Eventually, more and more Saiyans went with Durian’s idea until the others had had enough. They formed tribes of sorts, either tribe believing the other was wrong. Let’s fast forward a bit here, though…
    “We were cast off in a ship, eventually, to fend for our own. My grandfather found a planet- this planet- and settled down. At this point, we had fully evolved into present-day Furutans. We made up a story to tell…[Read more]

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  • Replying to comment by: Littleman (Part-Time Succubus (New Demon Boss)) y e a h .

    Yeah.

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  • Replying to comment by: Littleman (Part-Time Succubus (New Demon Boss))Uh... Anyone heard of Dreams?

    That PS4 ‘games-in-a-game’ thing?

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  • So, DBVW’s going well so far. Working on part 2 of chapter 1.

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  • Replying to comment by: MABEverybody's worrying about doing stay home school/work, mea

    Ah, yes, M O N E T .

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  • (Sneak peek of) Chapter One – The Legend Reborn

    [Planet Furuta, Age 779]

    Off in a building towards the center of Duria City, Eeto and Epla were training hard. They had already set up a routine they went through with Namgo eveey day.
    Stretches and a small warm up, going against punching bags and gradually increasing impact strength, another round of punching against test-dummies with the same gradual increase, the previous two with kicks instead, and then a 15-minute rest period.
    Next, an (independent) test against Namgo himself to see if they learned everything, and then a 30-minute cooldown period of Ki meditation. It was rough and took almost two hours including their breaks, but the boys got used to it, and it seemed to be paying off greatly.
    “Woah, Epla, I think you went up 4 FPUs today!” Eeto exclaimed after their main training was over.
    “Dude. You went up, like, 12 this week,” Epla said.
    “And you’ve gained, like, 10 not even counting today. Seriously, don’t be like that, bro,” Eeto replied back. “Namgo, shouldn’t he stop doing that?”
    “Yeah, Epla, lighten up a tad. You’re both making progress here,” Namgo pitched in. “Besides, we’re goin’ to try weights tomorrow. I think you’ll like that.” And it appeared he was right- Epla was suddenly beaming. They’d already heard about how weights work and all of their benefits, but for some reason Epla seemed a lot more interested in them than Eeto. It could have been that they had slightly different mindsets.
    “So, I’m at a… what, somewhere in the 500’s?” Eeto wondered aloud, closing his eyes and focusing on his Ki.
    “Yup, I’d say 502 FPU. Epla, you’re just a little lower- 480,” Namgo said, complimenting Eeto and trying to encourage Epla at once. “Anyways, guys, we should start our meditation.”
    The boys nodded, sitting down in place, cross-legged. They both enjoyed this meditation period because it was where a good chunk of their growth came from. As the boys’ breathing slowed and all movement came to a stop, Namgo swore he saw Eeto flinch out of the corner of his eye, but he couldn’t be sure.

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  • Prologue – Raw Power

    [Planet Furuta, Age 767]

    “King Durian, sir? Namgo has requested to see you as soon as possible,” a crackly voice said over the speaker on the king’s desk. “He said it’s urgent, and that it’s regarding the twins that were born just a little bit ago. Eeto and Epla.”
    “Please send him up. I’m certain it’s important if it’s going to be coming from him,” the king responded, the opposite end of the line going silent after a quick ‘affirmative.’ Durian opened his throne room door out of politeness so that Namgo wouldn’t have to spend a few extra seconds manually opening it. It was little things like these that kept Durian in power- there was no reason for the Furutans to overthrow him because they all liked him, and he did his job well while still keeping his ground and authority. And, within a minute or so, Namgo had reached the throne room.
    “Hello, Namgo. What is it you wanted to discuss?” The king asked Namgo when he’d taken a few steps into the large room.
    “Sir, it’s about Eeto and Epla’s power levels,” Namgo said. “As you know, the Furutan power-sensing method gives us a guide for our strength. Um… the boys- they already have a single FPU. And following the Furutan power-sensing method, that calculates to-”
    “The boys already both have a power level of 5!?” King Durian interrupted, visibly baffled. “So… a-are you implying that they’re already in peak condition?”
    “Well… physically, no. You don’t have to worry about that, they obviously both look their age. But in terms of raw power, yes, they are already as strong as any full-grown Furutan,” said Namgo. “I hope you can see why I’m a little concerned, as I am the eventual mentor for the boys.” Durian started for the large throne room’s door, rubbing his temples with a single hand.
    “This is just absurd… take me to their Incubation Chambers. I would like to see their current rate of growth to see if this poses any type of threat.”
    “Sir. They’re just being put in as we speak. The boys haven’t made any progress yet.” At this, Durian froze. He turned around and stared at Namgo with an expression that was a complicated mix of emotions, somewhere between fear, pride, and wonder.

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  • So I have a good portion of the beginning of DBVW’s story done in the guide doc, but I just can’t find a good way to start the actual story doc. Halp.

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  • How should Broly compare to Goku? Stronger or weaker?

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  • Replying to comment by: // Flashlock AnimatorSo, Goku's BPL... Since nobody here knows what the crud FPU

    Nobody responded so I just went for it. I feel like I’ve doing a lot of talking to myself lately.

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  • So, Goku’s BPL…
    Since nobody here knows what the crud FPUs are, how does 14,524,000 sound?

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  • I think I’m better off just making my own power levels at this point. I’ll just use the best stuff I can find and estimate them from there and crud.

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