The main problem is the pacing. It was a bit too fast so it was kinda hard to read the texts. And the pacing made it hard to understand what was even going on. And at a time the text blended with the background.
Otherwise it was pretty good.
You are in.
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yeah, I’m going to work on the dialogues, making it slower, longer and better, the subtitle font needs to be replaced to with something like Arial, Times New Roman, or Calibri (Mine’s Bahnschrift Condensed and it’s kinda hard to read but stylish for designing).
I’m not good at storytelling tho, and some were based on Mafia and Godfather franchise.
very detailed, this is a good indicator of the quality for the rest of the episode/series, and if true, you gonna be rivaling EB’s Project Landfall in terms of plot depth and character/environment design
big-ass, mech, solider boots to fill – but you might just be able to pull it off you madlad
This is decent. I’ma think about it for a little bit.
I’ll come back to this post later today.
Has a lot of potential. I like it.
Animation: 8/10
Fluid-ness: 8/10
Story: idfk/10
Uniqueness: 10/10
Pacing: 3/10
The main problem is the pacing. It was a bit too fast so it was kinda hard to read the texts. And the pacing made it hard to understand what was even going on. And at a time the text blended with the background.
Otherwise it was pretty good.
You are in.
If you want this uploaded on the channel just send the thumbnail, video title, and the description. [email protected]
yeah, I’m going to work on the dialogues, making it slower, longer and better, the subtitle font needs to be replaced to with something like Arial, Times New Roman, or Calibri (Mine’s Bahnschrift Condensed and it’s kinda hard to read but stylish for designing).
I’m not good at storytelling tho, and some were based on Mafia and Godfather franchise.
agree
wait,
what’s going on w akimbo
Just an animation community,
this is a hyun’s dojo ripoff, yes^
@ralph whaddaya think
copypaste youtube comment go!
very detailed, this is a good indicator of the quality for the rest of the episode/series, and if true, you gonna be rivaling EB’s Project Landfall in terms of plot depth and character/environment design
big-ass, mech, solider boots to fill – but you might just be able to pull it off you madlad
Hmm. Interesting. Time to push things even further.