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    Janomatorsubscriberfeatured-lvl1mega-noder 2026-06-29 22:04:07 UTC

    What do you think of my Luffy drawing?

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    • That’s beautiful Katie…
      No but fr it’s nice,there’s room for improvement tho
      I know @clvnisdrawing is good at stuff like this

      2026-06-29 22:19:01 UTC 6
      • Replying to: FizzyTheGreatThat’s beautiful Katie… No but fr it’s nice,there’s room for

        I have entered and my unasked for knowledge is about to be placed upon thee

        2026-06-29 22:40:44 UTC 6
    • The hats too small other then that it’s good

      2026-06-29 22:38:03 UTC 7
    • Firstly, you have made a good piece, much better than most could. I see knowledge of three dimensional awareness, understanding of shadow placement, and attention to smaller details. Good job so far.

      Now, first thing I’d do if I woke up as you is improving the line work. It’s not bad by any means, but rather seems it could be lighter. It looks like you’re holding the pencil down and slowly drawing all the way. Try gliding ur arm when drawing, or just making very quick pen strokes for better line work.

      Second, this is one piece, so it is an art style after all, but I’d still work on your overall proportion and anatomy. In particular the arms, they could look more natural, as they give off a sort of jelly look. The neck could also have a smoother transition into the upper body. His shoulders seem to run straight into his neck, with his traps looking non existent.

      Overall a good job for a beginner artist. Remember, smoother/lighter lines and pen strokes, and study others art for more knowledge on anatomy and proportions. Solid piece, have a good one!

      2026-06-29 22:55:29 UTC 5
      • Replying to: ClvnFirstly, you have made a good piece, much better than most c

        2026-06-30 00:31:02 UTC 0