Firstly, you have made a good piece, much better than most could. I see knowledge of three dimensional awareness, understanding of shadow placement, and attention to smaller details. Good job so far.
Now, first thing I’d do if I woke up as you is improving the line work. It’s not bad by any means, but rather seems it could be lighter. It looks like you’re holding the pencil down and slowly drawing all the way. Try gliding ur arm when drawing, or just making very quick pen strokes for better line work.
Second, this is one piece, so it is an art style after all, but I’d still work on your overall proportion and anatomy. In particular the arms, they could look more natural, as they give off a sort of jelly look. The neck could also have a smoother transition into the upper body. His shoulders seem to run straight into his neck, with his traps looking non existent.
Overall a good job for a beginner artist. Remember, smoother/lighter lines and pen strokes, and study others art for more knowledge on anatomy and proportions. Solid piece, have a good one!
That’s beautiful Katie…
No but fr it’s nice,there’s room for improvement tho
I know @clvnisdrawing is good at stuff like this
I have entered and my unasked for knowledge is about to be placed upon thee
The hats too small other then that it’s good
Firstly, you have made a good piece, much better than most could. I see knowledge of three dimensional awareness, understanding of shadow placement, and attention to smaller details. Good job so far.
Now, first thing I’d do if I woke up as you is improving the line work. It’s not bad by any means, but rather seems it could be lighter. It looks like you’re holding the pencil down and slowly drawing all the way. Try gliding ur arm when drawing, or just making very quick pen strokes for better line work.
Second, this is one piece, so it is an art style after all, but I’d still work on your overall proportion and anatomy. In particular the arms, they could look more natural, as they give off a sort of jelly look. The neck could also have a smoother transition into the upper body. His shoulders seem to run straight into his neck, with his traps looking non existent.
Overall a good job for a beginner artist. Remember, smoother/lighter lines and pen strokes, and study others art for more knowledge on anatomy and proportions. Solid piece, have a good one!