Did it crush his throat?

(:

It needs work, and this prolly won’t be received well if it gets submitted. I suggest you try adding some shading.

It looks good tho. But you should work a bit on the character’s movements.

I’d discard them like onions on a burger.

The gradients just feel a bit unnecessary. That’s all.

But that’s only a small section. I’m talking about everything. Biceps, thighs, calves, napes, ribs, you name it.