Replying to:Kingston ๐@tastylemon16 @teamwest @teothedan sorry for the mentions
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I lowkey liked the animation, youโve improved. I think the stick figure could have a bit more easing in and out when it turns and a more cartoony flow, but the mouse animation was really good
This is looking great so far, youโre doing a good job for pacing of the plot and the animation / design is very nice.
I have some critiques but they are very minor:
1. At some point in the animation perhaps have the default or something / someone swap the app skin to the default purely because having a custom skin can get confusing for anyone who isnโt familiar with the idea of one, this way as well you have that original theme in design to work with which will flow better.
2. The movements could be a tad smoothers and to connect slightly better but honestly itโs not close to looking bad or choppy.
3. You could use some original sounds just to make it more authentic but it doesnโt matter if not.
Imo its a little choppy, but tell me what you think
edit: good god Vimeo drops the FPS by a lot jeez this looks terrible now
Trust me, it wont be this bad when its uploaded to YT
This is pretty fresh ngl
Ava is something I could never do good lol
thx
amazing
kekek thx
@tastylemon16 @teamwest @teothedan sorry for the mentions
u guys are the best at giving advice, whats ur opinions
I lowkey liked the animation, youโve improved. I think the stick figure could have a bit more easing in and out when it turns and a more cartoony flow, but the mouse animation was really good
thx!!
i made the mouse rotate to give him more character but i wasn’t sure if it was good, so I’m glad you liked it
I’m not even sure there’s much I can say that needs improvement, this is all just some pretty good stuff
thanks mellow!
lol platinum skin moment
This is looking great so far, youโre doing a good job for pacing of the plot and the animation / design is very nice.
I have some critiques but they are very minor:
1. At some point in the animation perhaps have the default or something / someone swap the app skin to the default purely because having a custom skin can get confusing for anyone who isnโt familiar with the idea of one, this way as well you have that original theme in design to work with which will flow better.
2. The movements could be a tad smoothers and to connect slightly better but honestly itโs not close to looking bad or choppy.
3. You could use some original sounds just to make it more authentic but it doesnโt matter if not.
Good job
oi ralph watchu think 0f this im entirely hoping ur gonna see this on the side comments thing cuz i don’t feel like @ing you