First off, the weapon is uncreative. Literally everyone uses a katana and it’s lame. Secondly, add more weaknesses, that is a bad weakness and it’s not even a creative weakness. 3rd, the ability is fine I guess, it’s not something i’ve seen, but a very popular rhg known as Blazer uses dragons sooo. What are the stats out of? 100? 10? And lastly, the personality is cliche. You don’t use proper grammar the entire time, and the whole doesn’t like bad peoples and is shy is used to much. I guess the design is fine? Also, what’s his backstory? Overall, it’s not a very great rhg and I would advise you change it.