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    Refrigeratorsubscriberpro-noderfeatured-lvl1uc-winner-lvl3 2018-06-04 05:34:59 UTC

    Finished! What do u guys think?

    Name: Spark

    When he was little he use to tinker around with technology, learning more and more about it until he became a weaponsmith.
    One day his shop got ransacked by some bandits, unfortunately they got into his house also killing his family while he was building more weapons, he came back to see horrorific corpses as he finished working, in order to avenge his family and himself (for his weps) he closed his shop and even started making himself stronger… by makings parts of him robotic and also making a suit, he is intelligent but antisocial… it takes serious loyalty to make him trust someone but when he does he would protect them so much he would offer his own life.

    I can’t really think of a good story, so I hope u like dis

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    • 2018-06-04 05:37:31 UTC 0
    • This is what happens when you’re told your stick figure doesn’t have enough detail

      2018-06-04 06:01:23 UTC 1
    • Extendable claws and and boosters

      2018-06-04 06:20:21 UTC 0
    • Thx!

      2018-06-04 06:22:03 UTC 0
    • Dadder is proud

      2018-06-04 12:25:05 UTC 1
    • Ahem HOLY SH!T THATS COOL
      can we talk for a second

      2018-06-04 13:12:12 UTC 1
      • Replying to: Ramoxfire V2Ahem HOLY SH!T THATS COOL can we talk for a second

        Ok

        2018-06-04 13:32:29 UTC 0
    • Wow I didn’t know I had so much grammar mistakes..

      2018-06-04 13:31:00 UTC 0
      • Replying to: RefrigeratorWow I didn't know I had so much grammar mistakes..

        You have skills I’ll need can you join my series

        2018-06-04 13:37:09 UTC 0
        • Replying to: Ramoxfire V2You have skills I’ll need can you join my series

          what series?

          2018-06-04 14:02:19 UTC 0
    • Damn. remind me to read the story later.

      2018-06-04 13:55:48 UTC 0
      • Replying to: Explosive BulletDamn. remind me to read the story later.

        lol

        2018-06-04 14:01:12 UTC 0
        • Replying to: Refrigeratorlol

          In the group the Ramox series (I will find a better name later) but if you come over join and put some cool figs I can make you admin

          2018-06-04 14:05:49 UTC 0
        • Replying to: Refrigeratorlol

          So yeah your thoughts?

          2018-06-04 14:10:27 UTC 0
        • Replying to: Refrigeratorlol

          Alright, the suit piece is great but it looks like it used parts of a Thaltop Combat Bot. So I might add that into his lore. Theres also some things that might not be practical in the suit like the rocket boots. Just simple thrusters would probably work better. The replacement of limbs would most likely kill him so it would be more practical for him to loose certain limbs and get prosthetics. Overal the design is amazing and looks definetly like it was crafted by someone with little tech compared to the nations.

          2018-06-04 21:45:59 UTC 0
          • Replying to: Explosive BulletAlright, the suit piece is great but it looks like it used p

            So… should I remove the rocket boots?

            2018-06-05 00:25:31 UTC 0
            • Replying to: RefrigeratorSo... should I remove the rocket boots?

              and would I send him or somthin? @explosivebullet

              2018-06-05 08:43:10 UTC 0
              • Replying to: Refrigeratorand would I send him or somthin? @explosivebullet

                *should, son of a autocorrect

                2018-06-05 08:43:53 UTC 0
              • Replying to: Refrigeratorand would I send him or somthin? @explosivebullet

                Yeah, once you do some of those changes. Also you shouldn’t mention the person you are replying to in a reply.

                2018-06-05 13:49:32 UTC 0
                • Replying to: Explosive BulletYeah, once you do some of those changes. Also you shouldn't

                  Ok

                  2018-06-06 01:57:00 UTC 0