put me in coach!

1. @teothedan
2. Teo
3. https://sticknodes.com/download/people/Teo-the-Dan-v7-Movieclip.nodemc
4. the hoodie is all he really needs. if anything, a bubble vest over the hoodie (any color) would suffice

it\’s actually MAB\’s profile picture i believe

old user that was here

dick figure

put it in a project, blur it, then download as a png

good movement, but ease out each motion a bit more. the recoil and fall of the kick just moved a bit too fast, and some other parts seemed choppy. i recommend a few more frames of the kicks in full effect, then maybe a frame of it beginning to drop before fully dropping the leg

what\’d he do all the activity\’s gone

good impact, and a nice zoom at the beginning. i do have a few tips though.

– make sure each pose eases into the other. it kinda looks like their bodies are contorting and twisting impossibly for no reason. can be fixed with either inbetween frames or just less dynamic posing within movements.
– nice slowmo, but use it sparingly. it gets a little hard to tell whats slow motion and whats just a slow jump or something.
– ease through each position with a couple more start and end frames. it feels like theyre going from pose to pose without anything inbetween sometimes. like when the brown hair dude jumps he should keep a flow throughout the jump instead of stopping halfway through.

for your first fight though, this isnt bad. you show potential, keep practicing. and watch some alan becker tutorials.

good work, but add some movement when he lands to show his impact upon hitting the ground. it feels like a lot of effects and not much animating yet

not bad. i recommend working with simpler stick bases to practice though, just cause they\’re more versatile. nice windup, a little choppy but you\’ve got the movement pretty much down