Alright here’s my two cents
or three
or five

– Use punctuation, everything is a run-on sentence
– Why is there a fun fact dedicated to the reproductive organs of your character
– Why does his dad currently live in 3 different places
– He’s an assassin that kills people on earth but is also part of a boy band?
– Every planet in the galaxy’s culture is focused on assassination, except earth?

You didn’t change much in the story from last time. I recommend that this time, you take the advice from gigan and lemon, like legitimately this time. You always just say ‘ok’ then ignore the advice. Please don’t.

Download a ruler from the fig page, or just make a simple one yourself
Use it as a guide so some characters aren’t too big and others too small

Nice, though I recommend putting each character through a stickfigure ruler so the proportions aren’t wack

Cool though

perfectly matches the cringe humor of almost everything on ifunny tbh

That doesn’t change the context in the sentence, it still means that he will have created the most liked comment. If it was past-tense it would be “the most liked comment WAS created”

I beat the system
now make Teo

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I legitimately can’t tell if being dreamsexual is satire or not anymore.

Your style reminds me of Zaiko’s Mirror Jump

He’s not the one who discovered the smeckle, if you look in the comments a whole bunch of people are saying he stole it after one commenter provided the link lol

1. Lmao at the pic
2. Add me to server moment?

Just straight? Like the word “Alliance”? that’s bad. Even “Platinum Alliance” doesn’t have as much of a ring to it as “Platinum Squad”. Your brother has a mid opinion, PS is the classic name and it’s much more original.