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    Daveyy- 2018-12-08 22:09:44 UTC

    Ok haven’t changed c-30 but I do finally have his back story might be long . C-30 was stationed on a thaltop colony on a different planet to where the landfall series takes place .on this planet the people were put to labor as most of them were convicts of thaltop think as the first fleet of Britain. It got to the point we’re the people in the colony rioted for the convicts and a war began in the colony c-30 being a riot armour drone but during the war a tower fell down c-30 and 2 others had started to chase a Little girl when they got to her she hide in the rubble of the tower the two drones raised their guns but c-30 stopped them the only way a drone can he shot them.

    About an hour latter a ship landed to pick up the colony members that made it there c-30 and the little girl made it there but c-30 was busted up manly in tha leg.later the ship was shot down by NBC they sent to scouts up and they retrieved the suvivers . They got back to the camp site and a elite had around a sine up form for NBC many did sine up . The girl had no name she was a orthend from birth people said her name was j… but c-30 named her having been a ai unit . He said jazeme.. his voice box damaged he latter would communicate with her by code on her visor. She was taken in by the elite the elite trained her for the job as an elite she did get the rank and c-30 got it with her as being a model mad with good armor,speed and a brain un like others witch had one mind in a way he was latter killed by ? I just want him dead but I also liked to see him animated good and jake just a better Elite with a odd helmet kinda like Eva from halo

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    • Can I type any mor words?

      2018-12-08 22:11:21 UTC 1
    • “They got back to the camp site and a elite had around a sine up form for NBC many did sine up . The girl had no name she was a orthend from birth people said her name was j”

      SIGN

      ORPHANED

      lmao

      2018-12-08 22:39:39 UTC 0
      • Replying to: Ralph (Developer)"They got back to the camp site and a elite had around a si

        Thanks for the correction for one I am quite bad at spelling and two my keyboard is broken so now that your here what’s the deamon?

        2018-12-08 22:41:35 UTC 0
    • Okay. Here I’m gonna focus on the story. First, the idea of Thaltop being on another planet is instantly lore breaking. Every nation accept for the NLCO is stranded on the planet. This is due to the United Powers monitoring the planets orbit at all times. All the fleets from Britain, Canada and the US are NBC or pilquar as well. Remember that Thaltop seperated from the NBC. Riot bots also fall under the category of enforcer bots, riot armor on the enforcer bots is deliberately weaker but stronger against blunt hits, so the combat bot looking armor isn’t very accurate to his purpose, the communications through code on the visor is also impossible as any Thaltop bot isn’t built with a screen in their head. All Thaltop bots have AI as well. Theres just a select bunch that are built with personality and free thinking. Those are ones that look nothing like combat bots. I cant think of anything else. The story just isn’t deep enough either. It should go back to the purpose he was manufactured for. To now.

      2018-12-09 02:20:03 UTC 0
      • Replying to: Explosive BulletOkay. Here I'm gonna focus on the story. First, the idea of

        Thanks I didn’t know that thaltop was had the only colony on the planet the series takes place and thanks for the help with all that just tip c-30 has scrapped bits of metal but time for more work be back in a week with the finished product

        2018-12-09 02:26:13 UTC 1
        • Replying to: Daveyy-Thanks I didn't know that thaltop was had the only colony o

          And small animation I’m so saddened with Australian hey what country are you in?e

          2018-12-09 02:26:54 UTC 0
        • Replying to: Daveyy-Thanks I didn't know that thaltop was had the only colony o

          Alright, good luck.

          2018-12-09 05:59:08 UTC 0