Hey EB this better for Snake?

Backstory: Snake was created to spy on the most important NBC soldier although he could never get to the really good ones *cough* David *cough* he could could only get to Demonstrate father he followed him to were they lived he was then sent back to snipper. He then sent a thaltop bat to assassinate his family. The NBC soon caught Snake he was reprogrammed to attack any bot in the thaltop nation. While Snake was powered down he was reprogrammed again. This time he was enhanced with a jetpack and knife that can be shot with his arm.He was then given padded feet so no enemies would hear him sneak around like a “snake.”

That’s all I have so give me some pointers if there are some bugs with the story just please don’t take out the Deon part.

The only part that is upgraded is the upper body.
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