Replying to:FervorOh okay and yeah I had to fix some scenes with outside progr
The story was bit confusing at first, still is confusing. Basically no introduction at all to the world characters are in is what is weird. Is there a war? Is there a peace but some things are going on secretly? What is with the banners? Are they from different Galaxies? Are there factions?
Stuff like that. Basically work on gradually exposing the world step by step, so people first get to see main character’s personality (which shouldn’t be confusing too). Then steps to showing what time, place the action takes place. Then what is the problem in the series after viewers should understand the world. The series has this kinda jumbled about back and forth.
Replying to:arcionekThe story was bit confusing at first, still is confusing. Ba
The problem with so much lore (because there is A LOT) is I can’t fit it in one episode, I hope to show more and more and explain stuff but I hope it was good for the first part :/
And as for the main characters personality? It’s supposed to be complicated, he’s a complicated character with lots of twists and turns in his backstory
Replying to:FervorThe problem with so much lore (because there is A LOT) is I
Well I am working on the series myself. Currently plotwriting with team of people.
You’re not supposed to show everything in one episode, you have to just make it understanding what is going on. Like for example in Attack on Titan, we don’t know much. Except the fact world was invaded by titans and they live behind walls.
And when it comes to character. There’s a difference between confusing and complicated. It’s better to have a character be understanding, like viewers can get what they mean. Rather than being spontaneous. Good character is the one that goes through the changes.
Lol
Also, pro tip. Learn how to navigate with Auto Camera feature. It will greatly help speed up process and also remove the wonkiness.
Oh okay and yeah I had to fix some scenes with outside programs post animation so that’s probably why it’s wonky in some areas…
What did you think though?
The story was bit confusing at first, still is confusing. Basically no introduction at all to the world characters are in is what is weird. Is there a war? Is there a peace but some things are going on secretly? What is with the banners? Are they from different Galaxies? Are there factions?
Stuff like that. Basically work on gradually exposing the world step by step, so people first get to see main character’s personality (which shouldn’t be confusing too). Then steps to showing what time, place the action takes place. Then what is the problem in the series after viewers should understand the world. The series has this kinda jumbled about back and forth.
The problem with so much lore (because there is A LOT) is I can’t fit it in one episode, I hope to show more and more and explain stuff but I hope it was good for the first part :/
And as for the main characters personality? It’s supposed to be complicated, he’s a complicated character with lots of twists and turns in his backstory
Well I am working on the series myself. Currently plotwriting with team of people.
You’re not supposed to show everything in one episode, you have to just make it understanding what is going on. Like for example in Attack on Titan, we don’t know much. Except the fact world was invaded by titans and they live behind walls.
And when it comes to character. There’s a difference between confusing and complicated. It’s better to have a character be understanding, like viewers can get what they mean. Rather than being spontaneous. Good character is the one that goes through the changes.
“Well I am working on t
heseries myself. “*whistling*
i striked the “he” you’re missing tf out of the joke
I don’t get t joke
not sure if serious or sarcastic so I’ll just say
t series
I got the joke while trying to sleep.
I hate u-
“Is there a war?”
The Warring Houses
(I’m kidding but I lol’d)
the amount of foodspit flying out of this mans mouth is criminal
This makes me want to animate the story of my fallen.
Yours is in it just not the other version you made since the models don’t compare nicely.
I’m using the bryscan you made and sent me
Give me a sec. I’ll watch this is soon as I get the time.
oi m8 I never linked no wrong video
this is gonna be good tho (I’ll watch it tonight when I have time and criticize tf out of it)
Oh no
Man give him the spotlight, he deserves it.