– When stands are further away from their user and are short-ranged stands such as the ones shown here they lose power so you should move them closer to show that they actually can exert some intense force rather than a few slaps.
– The camera shake doesn’t look like it fits quite well, maybe keep it to a left to right slide slowly to add that feeling of suspense and to increase the feeling when there is a sudden kick-in of action.
– Dio doesn’t really do parkour or jump around too much, he relies on his stand and abilities to accomplish such things. A lot of his movement is grand almost like he doesn’t want to waste his energy on unnecessary things.
– Maybe instead make Dio seem like he teleports in using his ability to stop time.
The figures look great though as do the backgrounds so well done.
hmmmm, since when dio can parkour-
dio with the parkour and eyebeams
nice happy lil chibi style as well
i like this alternate take
do more
I have a few things to say about this:
– When stands are further away from their user and are short-ranged stands such as the ones shown here they lose power so you should move them closer to show that they actually can exert some intense force rather than a few slaps.
– The camera shake doesn’t look like it fits quite well, maybe keep it to a left to right slide slowly to add that feeling of suspense and to increase the feeling when there is a sudden kick-in of action.
– Dio doesn’t really do parkour or jump around too much, he relies on his stand and abilities to accomplish such things. A lot of his movement is grand almost like he doesn’t want to waste his energy on unnecessary things.
– Maybe instead make Dio seem like he teleports in using his ability to stop time.
The figures look great though as do the backgrounds so well done.