I have a few things to say about this:

– When stands are further away from their user and are short-ranged stands such as the ones shown here they lose power so you should move them closer to show that they actually can exert some intense force rather than a few slaps.

– The camera shake doesn’t look like it fits quite well, maybe keep it to a left to right slide slowly to add that feeling of suspense and to increase the feeling when there is a sudden kick-in of action.

– Dio doesn’t really do parkour or jump around too much, he relies on his stand and abilities to accomplish such things. A lot of his movement is grand almost like he doesn’t want to waste his energy on unnecessary things.

– Maybe instead make Dio seem like he teleports in using his ability to stop time.

The figures look great though as do the backgrounds so well done.