So I have a good idea down for the story. Basically, there are 3 clans. Zephyrin, Heroth, and Geran. Zephyrin is Peaceful, and doesnt have that much of a military. Heroth and Geran did, and they were fighting for territory while Zephyrin kinda just sat in the corner. Basically, Heroth started winning and Geran didnt like that, so they got up to some shady shit and started fucking Zephyrin up. Now Geran starts fucking Heroth up, and this is where the story starts.

Anything I should change?