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this post is criticism, not hate.
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So um, i don’t mean to be offensive.

But in my opinion, your recolors are messy.
Maybe you should try understanding what the original artist was trying to do.

Or maybe you just need some practice.
Now if i were to leave without criticism that would be disrespectful so,

1. the lines aren’t clean
2. the blood looks like scribbles, its like you weren’t actually trying to think of a blood-like consistency.
3. lack of shading (optional, im just more of a fine art person so you can ignore this-)
4. i don’t know if you can blend colors, but if you can, those switches from orange to red look a bit weird.
5. random black lines make the drawing look weird.
6. no understanding of atleast a bit of anatomy makes the drawing look weird. Maybe try using a reference.

and ya that’s all i see,

But if this is not what the original artist was going for, you don’t have to do this obviously, i’m just giving criticism.

if you do these, here:

sorry for the buttocks

try looking up shading tutorials on whatever software you use (once again optional)

idk if this is what your looking for but

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sorry for this long criticism post.

No

Join my collab then maybe

Oh I get it