Opinion on outerspace

When coll can get his life together

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I think all of what you\’re doing is kind of sloppy and unorganized. I can\’t keep helping you with this but you really need to restart and go in detail with making a new civilization. You\’re still using your old work which in all honesty isn\’t that good.

Talk about how they see the world in a way that\’s different from humanity. What species they are, where they are in the universe. You should stop using human standards unless if you want to. They\’re aliens afterall.

The Nodium requires my soul 24/7

But seriously that post I made based on new lore for your oc is something you could work with. It doesn\’t look like you did anything with it so far, or i just haven\’t noticed it.

I also think it\’s too early to talk about reproduction. That\’s something you should do for fun when you\’ve completed most of the lore already.

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I think you should redo the name cupidwey, it looks \”grammatically incorrect\”. Just a suggestion.

Do it now

Yes, the grapes came out. He needs a bath though.