NOTHING LIKE PARKOUR OVER THE SOULS OD DEAD CHILDREN

*Stands*
*Flashy effect*
*Still stands like he wants to die*

Actually put in some effort in non-combat stuff.
Also, where is the sky? Is this in the freaking void

ShadMan is like me but better at art, lol

This is Homosexual propagan-

We call it Jelly in ye olde England

PS: Don’t listen to Toxic’s message, he’s promoting lazy fig making, he’s a scarf user, and they’re a dead trend. Look to the stars brother and push your fig making skills to the limit : )

Ninja were spies, not assassins, so build him for getting information rather than killing. To stick wih the Japanese style, a pair of Kusarigama, a Jutte and a Wakisashinwould do rather than this Ninja-To straight bladed thing.

Um, i’d say the lore is fine, just expand it, there’s no urgent changes needed, a solid story

You asked how to improve, he told ypu.
It’s a well known fact that scarves are a sign of unoriginality