I feel like a lot of early producers of music fail on trying to keep a theme or aligning bits of music going. I don’t know music but it just feels a little jumbled. It has parts that are good enough stand-alone I guess but I think just keep playing around with it here like this and just take whatever criticism you can to really get feedback on it and tweak it. Maybe even going back to songs you’ve done and just tweaking it and saving those iterations to see what works.

Like I said I don’t know music though, this is a lot more than I can do so just keep going.