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    Challasoccifermoderatoruc-voteruc-winner-lvl3crusaderfeatured-lvl2master-nodersubscriber 2019-07-25 11:31:36 UTC

    His name Is John Derek.

    Before the war he lived in Los Angeles, He had 2 Children and a wife. The oldest child was about to graduate.They lived in a penthouse.
    He was the Owner of Humane Labs and Research (his job). That’s a secret government Lab were they experiment with High Power weapons to Alien Research. Everything was going well until the war broke out. The major told John Derek to lock down the Lab, so he did. It was lockdown, juggernauts inside and outside the lab, spike trips on the roads, every researcher was hiding. John Derek was ordered to stay in the Lab by the Major. 3 Months later He didn’t care about the lab but about his Family. He drove towards his Family and saw that his house was destroyed, after praying that his Wife and children weren’t in there, he saw 3 bodies. He lost everything Wife, children, Penthouse and more. Only thing he had left was Humane Labs and His money. From now on he kept saying : “ I wasn’t there for them, I only gave them money to live there without me, Money didn’t bring them Happiness, it was our Family that did” . He went back to the lab with mixed Feelings. He continued experimenting in the lab. They already have Prototype Tanks, Spacecraft, weapons, Jetpacks. But John didn’t care about anything they already had. He told everyone : “ Look what we are doing, We are making weapons for what?, for war?! We need to experiment with cures, help the world and not help to destroy the world. We need to find a cure for sickness and maybe Death”. Everyone looked at him, including the Major. The Major told him : “ You signed a contract with the goverment, you can’t change anything now”. John Derek was mad, he was the Owner but couldn’t decide what to experiment. He started experimenting by himself,p, he almost found a cure. Until the Major saw him. The Major arrested him and kept John in Humane Labs until lockdown was over. John felt betrayed, his lifework work was for war. John lost his trust in People, except for his good friend Micheal. He told Micheal to help him and Micheal said : “I’m waiting for the right moment”. 5 days later, the Stupid Major ended the Lockdown and immediately Micheal tried to Help John escape. The lockdown Gates were openingen and Soldiers rushed in, Everyone thought is was Their backup, until they started gunning everyone down, Micheal hurried to Break John free and it worked! Micheal said : “Hurry! They *Gunshots* killing everyone *gunshots*”. John kicked the door open and he rushed in the room, he told Micheal it was clear, Micheal rushed to the door and *gunshots* he was frozen, he was shot 4 times in his back. He fell on the ground and John tried to help until the mysterious soldiers double tapped him in his head. John fled and was got help from a NBC Soldier 5 miles away from the Humane Labs. After being taken care of by NBC, he joined them and fought with them against the enemy.

    John negative points:
    1. He doesn’t trust people.
    2. When he sees the Humane Labs he will no matter what happens he will try to enter it (even when they are w
    Fighting)
    3. He easily gets mads and his fingers is always on the trigger.

    John Good points:
    1. He’s a very smart guy.
    2. He knows everything with the experimental weapons , but he hasn’t told anyone about it.
    3. He will give his life to save children and wifes, he doesn’t care about Males
    4. He’s good with strategy, weapons, vehicles.
    5. He can fly choppers
    6. When tortured he won’t give any information to the enemy.

    Nation:
    NBC

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    • Was this to much detail on the story? Cause I feel like I did, even though this is a summary of his story 🤦‍♂️

      2019-07-25 11:39:26 UTC 3
    • Forgot to mention @explosivebullet , I know you have alot of characters already , probably this one won’t make it into the series. I gave it a try tho

      2019-07-25 15:20:51 UTC 0
    • add some ears and its the narnia guy

      2019-07-25 15:23:27 UTC 1
      • Replying to: Snipperadd some ears and its the narnia guy

        Mehhh, joke could have been better, but I give you 1 point for this one ☝️

        2019-07-25 15:25:22 UTC 0
        • Replying to: Challas Mehhh, joke could have been better, but I give you 1 point

          im lazy as (f word that i better not say if not i do bye bye) but ok ill take it

          2019-07-25 15:26:28 UTC 0
    • 3. He easily gets mads and his fingers is always on the trigger.

      this is an excellent combo!

      2019-07-25 16:15:06 UTC 3
    • The design ain’t too bad. Probably scaled some things wrong but I can fix that. I also have a lot of NBC characters. Though there is a lot of people who have disappeared that were in the series with unfinished characters so I might have alot less than I thought I originally had. The backstory is something I might have to look into later cause I don’t quite have the time today to do so but it seems it’s got a mini story in it which is a little bit of an issue is I’d find it hard to relate to the plot in PL now. But I will have to comment on the story later. Overall it’s not too bad.

      2019-07-25 18:40:30 UTC 0