it is here Part 2

Action: 3/10
Alright movements, but so slow-paced and choppy. I can’t really feel the action and fighting in this. Speed it up and delete some middle frames.

General Animation: 2/10
Can’t really tell what’s going on because of the slowness, and it makes for a short and boring anim. The character animations are very lackluster as well, only one body part at a time getting any movement and each movement being full of frames.

Basic Story: 1/10
I can’t really tell what’s going on, it’s 30 seconds of a guy doing a flip onto what I want to say is an octopus? Ya gotta give us some context or a startup there homie

Overall: 2/10
Not the best, but it can be. Just practice, and you can become great.
Study some tutorials like the ones of Alan Becker and others:

This was the bad ending the good ending is coming soon