Alright, I’ll pay you in Venezuelan Bolivars so the 5 dollars worth mountain cannot be used.

So keep a steady pace on how many characters are introduced overtime? Alright. Got it.

Mod sounds are usually from fallout 4. Sounds from youtube are from the sound videos. I just download the videos and extract the sound.

All of my sounds. Idk.

Youtube. Gun mods from games.

So I should introduce more characters each episode? If so I might try to bump it up a little bit. I think most of the issues I find are all dying down to the text and how much there is of it. That and how much I really have gotten on the series as of right now. And from my guess you are thinking I should start at a powerful area or event of someones life to introduce them, in which that sounds really good. I like the idea and will certainly put it into play. The whole thing about characters mentioning little bits of their past time from time, but I’m not too sure I would like to do that with every character. Cause not every character is like that in their personalities. Though I will do it for a few since it’s a great way to bring it out. Thanks for all this. Something tells me this is gonna help alot when I make episode 3.

Thanks. A lot right here.
-Animation in Episode 1 is certainly rough. Episode 2 improves on that.
-Showing the wars and things of the past would really crunch the context of the whole thing and im not too sure on how the showing to explain for the intro would work. Not too sure on that one.
-Since theres no music available that would fit, I decided to replace it with background sound. Though for some dialogue scenes I might attempt to add some music if I can find some music that’s fitting.
-Text is something I plan on cutting down on. It’s less of an issue in Episode 2, but still an issue, I will definetly focus on fixing that. I can agree with the guy on that, but on the other hand of the entire series being extremely boring and nothing but that, I can’t agree with that and everyone else also can’t. Though everyone can agree that the dialogue gets boring, as you mentioned.
-Once again this is back when I avoided adding music as it’s insanely hard to find. It also didn’t seem necessary for Dylan loading up. Non copyright music to be exact is something I can’t find. I do the same scene in Episode 2, except I fix everything mentioned with the addition of music.
-Like most big storylines, there isn’t exactly a main character, but there’s a few. Though the one who’s mostly the main character right now is Dylan, this comes more clear in Episode 2 as it really wasn’t that clear in episode 1.
-It isn’t exactly supposed to be a evil dude as the antagonist at the moment. At this point the plot is mostly man vs society or society vs society. Several types of plot that can occur in a storyline. In the real world military

Thanks. Conversation sections is what I can agree upon. Me being the one who made the whole thing and getting annoyed on reading the paragraphs all at once is certainly an issue. In terms of lore, the first two episodes have been largely introduction, though lore isn’t too much the focus as several nations have only been mentioned. With the NLCO being the base of the plot in the story and them being introduced slightly in Episode two and soon much more in episode 3, lore is gonna be dry. Kinda like Halo: Combat Evolved was. There was mentions of a recent ware that they had escaped and the small bit of info about what the halo rings are about. This is where I plan to really dig right into in the next episode. Episode 2 of PL is on a much lower end of the rising action area on a plot diagram. The action isn’t going to be much and theres still alot of mystery yet to be revealed which ends up drawing interest. Though once again with episode 3 being a big one where a lot is going to be released, it will be shoing visually the merciless nature of the NLCO. Though the first two episodes look beautiful, the enviroments are pristine and this is going to change very quickly as more wars break out. But I certainly will keep the text thing in mind, cause that annoys even me. But in terms of the whole series being extremely boring from this guys comment, that’s something that I can’t quite get around. Aside from the paragraphs of dialogue. But admitably, there’s gotta be more lore explained and that addition will fit in nice with the dialogue.