This was before the glow effect

Possibly

Since when was eaten a swear

Okay, I’m dumbing down on the whole “hate it if it’s a fight anim” so @sniperrifle11 may be dissapoint.

However, that does not make you immune to criticism that you MUST listen to and take into account if you wish to be a good animator.
Okay, so, my main gripe is design.
While there’s nothing wrong about having a scarf, day could be chilly, but when that’s the only thing you wear, that’s a problem, especially when your limbs are all just rounded segments with no additional detail.
I recommend a full redesign, giving them an interesting and unique design like this guy for example:

I will go over pacing, plot and atmosphere as well if you are willing to listen and follow my provided steps.

Epitaph’s like “lol I ain’t gon’ do anything about that’

Try using one of the Celestial Dawn figs like the Charcadon or a Tryquilleean and editing it

What?

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Jealousy.jpeg

Gonna start going hardcore on backgrounds now you’ve said that

Eventually ™
I can’t do it all the time

FRUIT GUSHER

Dude.
I told you how to improve.
Are you just ignoring me.